Sunday, January 3, 2010

Random dreams...

Between arbitrary abstract structures

A car is burning

A lone scavenger flew reverse way

So, I sat beside the boot space,

Will it be okay if I light a cigarette?


“So,how did it go?” you asked...

Silence or sarcasm?

There was enough silent bullshit

Sarcasm!!! Nah!!!

What the hell?


Between my scavenger and abstract

I lit the second cigarette

It was a hideous act...


“were you crazy?” you later asked...

In slow seductive whispers,

Like you were sleeping in my arms

Like you miss me...

2 comments:

Subhro Mitra said...
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Subhro Mitra said...

This poem reminds me of a Gogol-like disposition. Silent sarcasm is a very delicate emotion; it perhaps, has a hint of respect too.

This is good. It has germs of some disloged illusions of city poetry. Why dont you try writing on something broader, something universal?